Are Your Scenes Secretly Boring Your Readers?
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Are Your Scenes Secretly Boring Your Readers?
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What if your scenes are dragging, not because nothing is happening, but because the real action is hiding somewhere you haven’t thought to look? 🔍
In this episode, I tackle scenes that look like they should work — goal, conflict, stakes, banter, the whole shebang — but still feel like limp little rags on the page.
I share the two books that turned my conception of storytelling upside down, a tool for resurrecting a shambling zombie scene 🧟 and how to use the magical art of bibliomancy to make your characters more compelling.
Timestamps:
00:43 — When scenes should work…but don’t
02:10 — The two books that blew up my writing process
07:35 — What this smutty novel taught me about character work
13:02 — Why the hell wasn’t I doing this in my scenes before???
17:06 — Does every single craft breakthrough belong in this book, or are you using revisions to procrastinate?
18:14 — Next week on Will I Ever Finish This Fucking Book?
Want to check out the short story where I toyed with stretching out the rubber band of romantic and sexual tension?
🔥 Read Falling Phoenix for free at twinflames.life/freebies.
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